Let You Be The more you drift away The more I want you I should let this stay But, I know it’s not true. I got to let you go That is what’s right You doing what propriety show I guess, then give up...
Sometimes my Muse writes for me like here, only so much material for my life. :)
This was an escape from other worldly matters, I guess sometimes we think our material is autobiographical. :)
I posted a three verse poem and was encouraged to turn it into a song - now, this seems too long for a song, oh, well! Thank you for your comments, though!
The hardest part of love is letting go.One must do so with dignity and grace, not to mention every last bit of willpower!
George your words speak what my heart felt. I felt like you were articulating my feelings when I had to let go. Most excellent poem. It leaves an impression on me. John
My mum was nice So I reckon most women are You gotta talk to em but
I do like this though
beautiful Camarosc ... if only that were the case ... xxx Liz CHEERS So, I got to let you goThat is what’s rightYou doing what propriety showI guess, I should give up this fight.
George,I enjoyed reading your poem early this AM.Jan
I totally UNDERSTAND this George as it spread into my heart in already known places... Bri~
Congratulations, George. :)
Congrats George!!! *****Clapping***** Bri~
Thank you, John, for your nice comments. George
Thank you, this makes my night; I was away for a few days only dropping in here to read a few poems and only tonight realized this poem was awarded! :)
One can feel the hopeless heart ache dripping in this piece ! Loved this